Post by Hazel Forrest on Apr 3, 2007 20:24:17 GMT -5
YOU NEED A DESC! Immediate ejection imminant. Then Abania will whisper, "Please have a non-retarded desc. Kthxbye," to you. Lets see some inappropriate ones.
(You see (Name not shown))
>I am (Name not shown). A rice ball in disguise!
>> Okay. So far we see a rice ball. A. Not descriptive enough. B. There are no such thing as living rice balls. C. Are you a 1st grader?!?!
(You see (Name not shown))
>
You need a desc. If yours got deleted, make it say pending or something.
(You see (Name not shown))
>Hi! I am nice and sweet and friendly. RP with me!
>.> If you want to rp, people need to know what you are!!!!
(You see (Name not shown))
>I am a 8 out of 10 star RPer.
No. No you are not. Sorry dude. If you want us to know how good a RPer you are, show us with your desc!
(You see (Name not shown))
>http://NotShownHere.com
>I don't mind this but I don't love it.
Now for some good examples!
(You see Zeta Zoy)
The furre wore a gold diadem atop her head encrested with rubies, emeralds, pearls, and sapphires. Blue eyes shone from a pure golden face. Her hair slithers round her thin, showing, waste. A gold, floaty material shows her bare, golden shoulders and her waist. A floaty, netted skirt from the hips down ends at her bare ankles. Emerald beads are strung into her hair and end in little puffs of headfur. Thin waist and heavily muscled arms shown a fit physique under the gold skin. [Mocha made port]
YAY! ME! But really people. It's descriptive, it uses happy big words, and it shows how good the rper is without saying it! Le gasp! And it gives credit to the artist! Rigel rox with digi art like that! :B
(You see Rigel)
> Cream tinted pelt had ebon blots splattered over it. Golden feline oculus gazed about the desert sands. Studded into the inky ears were ivory hoop earrings. On the wrists and ankles of the Egyptian Mau were golden bracelets. On the pads were long, thick and extremely thorny dark talons. A lengthy tail swayed elegantly about the light physique. A golden collar with a Citrine gem shaped into a thin pendeloque cut noted she was the Royal Pet of Abania
Squee! It is descriptive, uses big words, AND talks about the character. Shock and amaze.
(You see Brietta Lily)
You see a beautiful young maiden. She has golden brown hair that flows to her waist with touches of pink here and there and pretty eyes that remind you of the ocean. Her figure is slender and wrapped in pink silk. She seems flirty and you really want to speak with her..
Short but sweet. Do I really need to say anything?
(You see (Notshownhereforsomereason)
A shapely figure with angelic movements aggrandizes the unmistakable beauty of a goddess bursting with an efflorescence demeanor, unaware of her own inner strength. Ethereal features outline her body, her heart beating in tandem with the clouds of Heaven. Bestowed upon her godly figure, Light Blond locks cascade down her back, outlining her curves even more. Her luminous peaceful pink optics taking in every object around her, she smiles to herself, content with her surroundings.
Hmmm, hm, HM! It's veryyy good, but it is a bit... outside the box, which in this case isn't good. It doesn't actually DESCRIBE her, just her beauty...
(You see (Name not shown))
>I am (Name not shown). A rice ball in disguise!
>> Okay. So far we see a rice ball. A. Not descriptive enough. B. There are no such thing as living rice balls. C. Are you a 1st grader?!?!
(You see (Name not shown))
>
You need a desc. If yours got deleted, make it say pending or something.
(You see (Name not shown))
>Hi! I am nice and sweet and friendly. RP with me!
>.> If you want to rp, people need to know what you are!!!!
(You see (Name not shown))
>I am a 8 out of 10 star RPer.
No. No you are not. Sorry dude. If you want us to know how good a RPer you are, show us with your desc!
(You see (Name not shown))
>http://NotShownHere.com
>I don't mind this but I don't love it.
Now for some good examples!
(You see Zeta Zoy)
The furre wore a gold diadem atop her head encrested with rubies, emeralds, pearls, and sapphires. Blue eyes shone from a pure golden face. Her hair slithers round her thin, showing, waste. A gold, floaty material shows her bare, golden shoulders and her waist. A floaty, netted skirt from the hips down ends at her bare ankles. Emerald beads are strung into her hair and end in little puffs of headfur. Thin waist and heavily muscled arms shown a fit physique under the gold skin. [Mocha made port]
YAY! ME! But really people. It's descriptive, it uses happy big words, and it shows how good the rper is without saying it! Le gasp! And it gives credit to the artist! Rigel rox with digi art like that! :B(You see Rigel)
> Cream tinted pelt had ebon blots splattered over it. Golden feline oculus gazed about the desert sands. Studded into the inky ears were ivory hoop earrings. On the wrists and ankles of the Egyptian Mau were golden bracelets. On the pads were long, thick and extremely thorny dark talons. A lengthy tail swayed elegantly about the light physique. A golden collar with a Citrine gem shaped into a thin pendeloque cut noted she was the Royal Pet of Abania
Squee! It is descriptive, uses big words, AND talks about the character. Shock and amaze.
(You see Brietta Lily)
You see a beautiful young maiden. She has golden brown hair that flows to her waist with touches of pink here and there and pretty eyes that remind you of the ocean. Her figure is slender and wrapped in pink silk. She seems flirty and you really want to speak with her..
Short but sweet. Do I really need to say anything?
(You see (Notshownhereforsomereason)
A shapely figure with angelic movements aggrandizes the unmistakable beauty of a goddess bursting with an efflorescence demeanor, unaware of her own inner strength. Ethereal features outline her body, her heart beating in tandem with the clouds of Heaven. Bestowed upon her godly figure, Light Blond locks cascade down her back, outlining her curves even more. Her luminous peaceful pink optics taking in every object around her, she smiles to herself, content with her surroundings.
Hmmm, hm, HM! It's veryyy good, but it is a bit... outside the box, which in this case isn't good. It doesn't actually DESCRIBE her, just her beauty...
